tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4439190160820962365.post6000376510163212972..comments2023-06-08T17:13:45.976-07:00Comments on Fetish Village: Story: Tam's AmberTaedishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05054292087404483236noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4439190160820962365.post-76893133145375774412018-12-07T03:39:28.461-08:002018-12-07T03:39:28.461-08:00This is quite beautifully written. My Big-Couples ...This is quite beautifully written. My Big-Couples story was going to be about a goddess, her little giant, and a normal-sized man, even though I’m not into couples scenarios. And even though I’m not into them, this is one of my favorite stories from this contest. Beautifully done.<br /><br />I like that the little guy doesn’t know whose mouth he’s in at some point. Did you intentionally spelled the roof of her mouth as “palette” to give it a poetic ring? Speaking of imagery, I love “Hidden blood surged around me”. What a powerful line!<br /><br />Who is this Scots warlock, and does he do commissions?<br /><br />I also love the line “Tam’s body Star Destroyered its way above me”. That movie moment is tattooed into my mind forever, and it was quite lovely to transpose it into this moment, and see a male form become that huge mass.<br /><br />And that last line was/wasn’t a surprise. Wonderful work! <br /><br /><br /><br />Undersquidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04021519995703756709noreply@blogger.com